All I had to do was grab the outstretched fingers. He begged me to help. I smiled and walked slowly away. I knew she would soon forget him.
Whew! An emotional punch with this one. I like that the MC walked away *slowly*. Nice job!
A sinister story that packs quite a punch.
Nicely done, and very creepy.
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Whew! An emotional punch with this one. I like that the MC walked away *slowly*. Nice job!
A sinister story that packs quite a punch.
Nicely done, and very creepy.