There was no escape. She gazed ahead, ready for the gun to trigger her fate. As it fired, she heaved the oars back and took the first stroke.
Well written; I was expecting an entirely different ending.
This is a great story with a wonderful twist!
Nicely woven.
Not what i was expecting! Was thinking marathon race.
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Well written; I was expecting an entirely different ending.
This is a great story with a wonderful twist!
Nicely woven.
Not what i was expecting! Was thinking marathon race.