He blinks through bourbon. The road undulates like a whore’s tongue. He falls to his knees, forgiveness in the beam of oncoming headlights.
Vivid.
Thanks, Tucker!
This is my first time here at One Forty Fiction and I’m thrilled!
Your carefully chosen words tell a much bigger story. Nice one!
Thanks, Shelley! Glad you stopped by.
Strong emotion in this piece. Deeply felt.
Powerful!
A well told story. small yet complete.
Thank you, Lisa and Gayle! I appreciate your comments.
Okay, WOW. Nicely done, Madeline.
Stacey and Milo – thanks for stopping by!
Strong imagery in this story. Sad message successfully conveyed.
Nicely done! Love the punch at the end.
Jan B and Sally – thank you so much for your comments!
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Vivid.
Thanks, Tucker!
This is my first time here at One Forty Fiction and I’m thrilled!
Your carefully chosen words tell a much bigger story. Nice one!
Thanks, Shelley! Glad you stopped by.
Strong emotion in this piece. Deeply felt.
Powerful!
A well told story. small yet complete.
Thank you, Lisa and Gayle! I appreciate your comments.
Okay, WOW. Nicely done, Madeline.
Stacey and Milo – thanks for stopping by!
Strong imagery in this story. Sad message successfully conveyed.
Nicely done! Love the punch at the end.
Jan B and Sally – thank you so much for your comments!