At the Playground

Father watches daughter run, jump, swing, laugh, spin, dance, climb. Tell her now? No. He treasures her last minutes of innocent bliss.

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Jan Brown says:

October 4, 2012 at 11:46 am

Poignant. The story implies a pending divorce, but it could be some other bad news. Evokes feelings of empathy and anticipation. Very effective. Well done!

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Victoria says:

October 4, 2012 at 9:21 pm

Oh dear! What will he tell her? A cliff-hangar! Well written!

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E A M Harris says:

November 3, 2012 at 4:31 pm

I really liked this. It leaves so many things unanswered but is also complete.

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