Impact Sight

He texted her; she texted him back. At dinner, they sat eating in a magnificent desolation, two satellites trading light.

Critiques

4 Responses

  1. Lovely writing, wonderful imagery. Also reminds me of two people who communicate so well electronically, but in real life–not so much!

  2. This is a true statement to how people are specifically now adays. To much technology instead of verbal and physical communication. The world would be much different if people focused on what’s in front of them physically rather than technologically

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