His cheeks burned as the line of boys dwindled. In the outfield, daydreams of ninja skills brought a grin. The baseball fell at his feet.
Superb; you’ve packed a whole story into these three lines. Well done!
I believe you have captured my childhood in 140 words.
This evokes experience with economy. Bravo!
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Superb; you’ve packed a whole story into these three lines. Well done!
I believe you have captured my childhood in 140 words.
This evokes experience with economy. Bravo!