Mommy And Santa

I saw Mommy kiss Santa. He grabbed his pants and ran when Dad got home. I’ll bet I get lots of toys because Santa likes Mommy’s cookies.

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Dino Parenti says:

October 2, 2012 at 11:42 am

This will have me chuckling all day. Nice work:)

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Len Hume says:

October 2, 2012 at 7:05 pm

Hi Bill – am enjoying your flash stories. Would like to know how the novel’s going – any progress?

Len Hume

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Evert Asberg says:

October 4, 2012 at 2:33 am

Very funny. A micro story as well as a joke.

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