Behind the Curtain

Jen sings in the shower. Talons click closer. Unseen breath shudders the curtain. She shuts the spray. Hears dripping. Not water. Saliva.

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4 Responses

  1. Yikes, this is a creepy story. I’m so impressed with how frightening you were able to make it in so few words. I’m just about to hop in the shower and I’m kind of nervous now. Well done!

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