Class Trip

The river surges, gulps down the sinking ferry. Ann’s students claw at her. She drowns in their terror before being swallowed by the sea.

Critiques

Milo James Fowler says:

May 17, 2012 at 11:29 am

…and this is why I would NEVER take my class on the Maid of the Mist! A frightfully good one, Madeline.

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Gayle Beveridge says:

May 17, 2012 at 5:59 pm

The imagery in this story is superb.

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Steve B says:

May 18, 2012 at 1:56 am

Wow! Vivid and creepy.

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Stacy Post says:

May 20, 2012 at 8:12 pm

What a way to go! Creepy good, Madeline. You’re in the zone!

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Lindsey McLeod says:

May 28, 2012 at 7:50 am

Loved this one – excellent twist for something so short and direct.

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