Doorbell

Doorbell. It’s them. I’m sure. Come to deliver the news. Tuesday. Closed-casket. Wear black. When I see the postman I laugh so hard I cry.

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Kim McCully-Mobley says:

January 10, 2013 at 7:01 am

Wow. This is truly haunting. The postman comment sure throws me a curve. Would love to see the sequel!

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Jan Brown says:

January 12, 2013 at 3:40 pm

Great story told in short bursts, rythmically, followed by a terrific ending! Very well done.

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Stephanie Christian says:

January 15, 2013 at 2:47 pm

Awesome! I love this. I have never read something so touching and phenomenal in my life.

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