First and Last Stop

She’s on the school bus. She crouches low in back. The driver doesn’t see her. She’ll stay here all night. It’s warmer than at home.

March 22, 2013
Nathan Alling Long
childhood, political

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Angel Zapata says:

April 10, 2013 at 8:22 am

This breaks my heart. Well done. Props for also managing to create your tale as a 5×5: a 25-word story told in 5 sentences of 5 words ea.

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