I Give You My Heart

She’d given him a kidney years ago. Now she needed a heart. He called 911, told them everything they needed to know, & pulled the trigger.

Critiques

10 Responses

  1. I still think the authorities will be suspicious even though he told them he was going to shoot himself. He also had to be careful where he shot so as to not damage his heart.

  2. Someone mentioned that this was “improbable”, which it is, but is that not a factor in many stories?

    I thought it was really good. =)

  3. I think this is a true act of kindness. It’s always a beautiful thing to see people passing on good deeds. Although tragic, it is still touching.

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