Moving In and Moving On

He dropped the last box onto the dorm room floor, and watched his parents drive away. He’d never belong in just one place, ever again.

Critiques

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  1. I’m sure a lot can relate to this, but I guess it really hits home with me (no pun intended) as this happened to me just a few years ago and I’m still not used to not being “home”.

    This piece is simple but very well done!

    1. Thank you Amy and Spencer for your kind critiques. And Spencer, it does get easier, but yeah – you never really belong in only one place ever again.

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