My Biggest Regret

When I eat clementines I see that time in your bed when you fed me by hand, slowly. To think I broke it off with you through text message.

Critiques

2 Responses

  1. Thank you! I wanted the ending to be somewhat jarring. I’m glad the juxtaposition of the actions came across 🙂

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