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My eyes met his as he dug the blade in. I saw sorrow; he saw fear. His buddy yelled, “Let’s go.” I prayed these burglars left my child alone.

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  1. Heart wrenching. Even in this short length I can vividly feel the emotions going through the people. I really hope that the child will be all right.

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