The Aftermath of Goodbye

The door closed, her plane pulled away, and she was gone. A long journey home in the car, and silent sorrow from the two children in back.

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  1. this kind of writing is easily something any loving mother and or father can relate to. The children i believe take the hardest hit when a prent leave because their role model and the person they trust most is no longer around for a period of time.

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