‘Til Death

“Trust this only,” she growled in my ear. “I’ll come back for you.” I shuddered as I pulled the knife from her spine and let her drop.

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Ines Franco Fatzinger says:

June 27, 2012 at 1:10 am

Ooooo…love this. Revenge from the other side – very creepy and good foreshadowing. Great writing!

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Gayle Beveridge says:

June 27, 2012 at 3:47 am

I love the voice of this piece and the dialogue, “Trust this only” sets it up beautifully.

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Love The Bad Guy says:

June 27, 2012 at 4:49 am

Thank you very much for taking the time to comment. 🙂

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Donna Marie says:

July 3, 2012 at 10:07 pm

I love this!

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Love The Bad Guy says:

February 13, 2013 at 11:49 pm

Thank you, Donna.

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Vasu Gangapalli says:

May 8, 2013 at 4:59 pm

It was really great!

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