Two Dead in Black Lake

Two lovers in a rowboat. My wife and her assistant. Their lake is oil dark, still, but dangerous. Like me.

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  1. The moody, atmospheric quality of crime noir lends itself quite easily to microfiction. This piece is a fine example of that — and quite literally, too, in the case of the lake itself.

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