Unforgettable Delores

For years, she had dreamed of a memorable spring break. The day she walked out in a bikini, it was indeed, memorable. She was sixty-seven.

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7 Responses

  1. I love old ladies who still have vigour, I hope her bikini was purple and she was still wearing a grannie hat

  2. I’m sure there’s a Delores out there, rockin’ a purple bikini and awesome granny hat. And lookin’ and feelin’ real good!

  3. Loved your story. It reminded by of ‘Flowers for Mrs Harris’ – a touching and poignant tale by Paul Gallico.

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