Snow steadily falls over the region, wrapping around everything like a blanket. The children are delighted, happy the snow is finally here.
Snow steadily falls over the region, wrapping around everything like a blanket. The children are delighted, happy the snow is finally here.
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Awesome Jan – way to go :D:D
Nice, but I’m a bit meh about the word snow being used twice in such a short piece
Yeah, I agree about using the word snow twice in a short sentence. Of course, now after my piece is published it is when some other choice phrases come to mind that could color things up. Thanks for the critiques.
Haha, I know how that is!